tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post8931362544690056784..comments2023-11-30T13:56:09.850+05:30Comments on Aayanisms: Taintaayanmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-51187434179133825052012-02-14T14:01:07.727+05:302012-02-14T14:01:07.727+05:30Concise and conveyed excellently.Concise and conveyed excellently.Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07174562168503272243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-52023708335731499722012-01-21T07:46:21.919+05:302012-01-21T07:46:21.919+05:30I like what you say about it being like dominoes, ...I like what you say about it being like dominoes, it defiantly puts the picture in my head, and leading one into the unknown without a conclusion makes me chuckle because I think we live like that every day.<br /><br />I look forward to see more, and well I might try something of the sort it sounds intriguing. <br /><br />Right on Gyanban!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-69090568298449564742012-01-20T17:39:21.890+05:302012-01-20T17:39:21.890+05:30@Saru - thanks, forgiving someone takes a lot of m...@Saru - thanks, forgiving someone takes a lot of mind control and it is part of evolution,so it does take time, but it is not impossible.<br /><br />@Alka - thank you. It is part of the design to keep Kamala's story to the readers imagination.<br /><br />@Falling Universe - Thank you for your observations. The ideal 55 fction is where the twist is at the very end and it acts like falling dominos connecting one thought to another.Almost all micro-fiction stories are like a synopsis or a teaser which just keeps hooked to know more...more like leading your thoughts into the unknown without necessarily drawing a conclusion.<br /><br />Therefore getting the right balance is most critical,how much to leave vs. how much to keep.So I am going through a learning process,some turn out ok - but there is along way to go before I find the the right words to express and create the perfect micro-fiction.<br /><br />Thank you for dropping by and appreciating the work.<br />Cheers<br />GBaayanmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-1336942581644927002012-01-20T12:41:37.090+05:302012-01-20T12:41:37.090+05:30I like your recent form of writing here "55 w...I like your recent form of writing here "55 word fictional story", very intriguing. This makes me think of haiku in the sense of restrictions, but when you know the process the ability to create goes in infinite directions. Your story is left with and without much. <br /><br />It seems like it is hard to get used to what to leave out and what to leave in. I think that I would almost fight myself for words, in that i wouldn't know what I would include and leave out just so the reader gets the information, as well as just enough so the author doesn't seem like they push it either.<br /><br />So In that respect I can see that it is difficult, so congrats for you in accepting this difficult terrain.<br /><br />Right on.<br /><br />P.s. I do like the other 55 works that you have hear as well, nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-40445019192544064852012-01-19T15:32:49.036+05:302012-01-19T15:32:49.036+05:30very intresting post....it leaves u wondering want...very intresting post....it leaves u wondering wanting to know more and more about kamala..very well writtenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734132437936800460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-13865938451657871192012-01-19T00:56:35.510+05:302012-01-19T00:56:35.510+05:30Good one...You can't forgive someone who kille...Good one...You can't forgive someone who killed your soul...Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-39664123996478478642012-01-18T23:22:09.799+05:302012-01-18T23:22:09.799+05:30@Hariharan - welcome to Gyanban. My posts are alw...@Hariharan - welcome to Gyanban. My posts are always like this,so am not surprised.<br /><br />@Enigmatic Soul - Welcome to Gyanban - thanks for appreciating.Would invite you to read some more if you get the time or inclination.aayanmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-69861576846964361412012-01-18T20:07:43.735+05:302012-01-18T20:07:43.735+05:30Incorporating everything in mere 55 words is a cha...Incorporating everything in mere 55 words is a challenge, no doubt. But you did great. Well written.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36714657.post-3507885650780083572012-01-18T19:16:48.631+05:302012-01-18T19:16:48.631+05:30It must be quite a task! But without the backgroun...It must be quite a task! But without the background that you have given at the bottom it may not be possible to understand.Hariharan Valadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12244321351448793974noreply@blogger.com