Gyan Ban: For 55 Seconds.

October 28, 2009

For 55 Seconds.

A sense of exhilaration engulfed him. He thought this is it .I am done. I am free now, free from all the shackles free from the hell I was in.. I can breathe now. Suddenly he looked around to see the spike had flattened. He would never drink anymore, because he never lived anymore.

7 comments:

Shruti10/28/09, 1:41 PM
Hi gyanaban!
Hey my very first time here!! I loved this 55Fiction so much! Good one yaar!! U don't have a followers widget?

P.S: Hey I love ur template!!
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Roshmi Sinha10/28/09, 3:30 PM
Nicely done...
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Gyanban10/28/09, 6:02 PM
Thanks for the comments.Didn't realize anybody would be interested to follow this blog...well I have added the link now.
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Roshmi Sinha10/31/09, 12:30 AM
I've tried my hand at micro-fiction. Do let me know what you think...
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aria11/1/09, 9:54 AM
Hmm .. 'living' and existing sometimes are so very similar that it requires no effort .. interesting story.
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Gyanban11/1/09, 6:10 PM
Look at those who are dead and living around you.
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Roshmi Sinha11/2/09, 5:56 PM
Do let me know your take on my latest flash fiction...
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