September 10, 2013

Anamnesis


After yet another boring day at work,Stella trudged into her apartment.
The Spitz barked every time she crossed his path.
‘Hush  puppy’she chuckled ignoring him.
Walking into the living room,she reclined on the rocking chair. 

Just then,widower Mr.Venkatraju, walked out of the bedroom with a newspaper & sat on the rocking chair.

Irritated, Stella flew out of the window.






Gyanban Thoughts : a 55 fiction after a long time.This time the theme is spooks.Thought of writing a longer version initially,but settled with micro fiction format. Ghosts hang around the places they love.In this case,perhaps it was Stella's house before she died.The Spitz remembered her and needless to say Mr.Venkatraju was completely oblivious to what was going around him! The title Anamnesis means recollection or remembrance of the past. Hope you guys liked it!

4 comments:

  1. Am reading a fiction 55 after a looong time and am am glad I did... took me by surprise at the end... good one!

    -Tavish

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  2. Good to see you back here after a long time. Thanks for reading.

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  3. wow. This is nice. Your thoughts in the end make it more clear. :)

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  4. I for once thot Stella was a bird ;)

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