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Et tu ?

'Give me your number again ,I just lost my address book’ requested Rohit.

'9211 04201’.........

.....'& Radhika’s?

‘hey isn’t my number enough? .....Why do you want my wife's number ? Rahul joked.

‘Ufff, I am planning to run away with her.... happy?’ they both laughed loudly.


'Thanks buddy’ said Rohit...with the two airtickets clutched in his palm.

Gyanban Thoughts - Thought of giving it an alternative tittle - A friend indeed a friend in need ! am guessing most readers would think Rohit ran away with Radhika...see how we all think alike ? But I must confess somewhere the thought did cross my mind what if Rohit was actually clutching the connecting flight ticket ?


  1. that was the quickest and quirkiest dhoka story i have ever heard.

  2. ouch! thats just cruel...

  3. Hey..Its a super piece here! is this a 55 fiction style? if I'm not wrong..
    definitely difficult to pen..
    Am trying to pen one too but nothing as wonderful as urs has come tomind as yet!!!

  4. OMG!!
    Please God, save us from such friends!! :D
    Good one!! :)

  5. ouch...friend like dese are soooo not needed...

  6. @meghpeon - thanks...but why do you say quirkiest?

    @Dagny ouch meaning ?

    @Sunshine - ouch meaning cruel...isnt it.?

    @ramblings - smile back !

    @Vibhuti - yes this is 55 fiction.look forward to your post.

    @Aparna - Witty and how! Tongue n cheek i'd say.

    @Shilpa - there s a dark side in all of us ! even spiderman III has.

    @Tweety - you betcha.!

  7. yep ouch meaning cruel!!

  8. @Sunshine - but did you read the foot note?

  9. Very witty! Short, yet perception makes all the difference :)

  10. Short and sweet......was your friend trying to take his wife away from you(in a lighter sense)?

  11. @Mohan - thanks am glad you liked it !

    @Old monk - ha ha my friend wouldn't risk that my friend....he would probably loose his ear drums,hair and skin in the process...:-))

  12. hey hey..I dint think they ran away..:) anyways nice post..short and sweet..:)

  13. I actually thought he ran away with his friend's wife, till I saw your foot note.. Too good :)

  14. wwow... wattaeyy twist..
    i too was thinkin on similar lines..
    but then kahani mein u havent mentioned if ROhit is engaged or married or atleast committed so chances are it could be his GF's ticket too :P

  15. @Vamsi - i am happy that you thought lateral...thanks for dropping by.

    @nikki - thanks Nikki am glad you liked it.!most of us did think he ran away...

    @megzone - that is deliberate to keep you thinking...! :-)

  16. This brought a smile on my face. Very quick and aptly written. loved the pace. :)

  17. @tikulicious - thanks and am glad you liked it...I quite liked the parenting post if I may call it so...calls for a debate actually..

  18. Lol! :P Saw your thoughts...but it's hard to not think otherwise... :D

  19. @psych babler - yes agree most of us thought the same...

  20. @psych babler - yes agree most of us thought the same...

  21. One of the best 55-Fictions I have read and kya twist mara :) I mean the Note after the story ;)

  22. Wow! Nice one. I especially loved the twist!

  23. @dmanji - thanks for reading et tu. I am quite new to 55 i ll take it as a compliment.

    @magali - am gald you liked it.

  24. I see you have changed your blog template! I like it...! :)

  25. I see you have changed your blog template! I like it...! :)

  26. thanks..struggled a lot to get all the widgets working..still some work to do.

  27. wow that was some story... :D brilliant :D

  28. Thanks Rajlakshmi - am glad you liked it.

  29. Nice , My type of guy he hehehe ... I thought what most have thought but then I also thought he has the tickets for somebody else..

    But the number coincidence is great just one digit difference wow

  30. Thanks mannbik...much appreciated.

  31. Without your footnote, I was already thinking about a beach in Bahamas for them ;)

  32. He he that was the idea, and that s when it struck me that this could be made into a short film.

  33. Great Story. Loved the style!

  34. Thanks Sowmya and welcome to Scrambled Egg!!

  35. Love the text above the comment box. I mean it. :) Nice to be here, looking forward to reading more..

  36. @Arslan - Welcome and thanks.

    @D2 - thank you !

    @Chitz - Well the jury is still out on that.!

  37. great efforts

  38. @Corpusmoney @Ausdrucklos @MaumitaB - thank you.Much appreciated.

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