touched by time...
touched by time...
a salt statue...
edge of cliff...
reach the sky...
my pensive sky...
Gyan Ban Thoughts - be kind, you never know who's heart you touch and who's blessings you might need.
Each verse is for each stone in the picture.
One Single Impression.
Time heals everything...ReplyDelete
Beautiful pensive poem GB.
Pain, turmoils and emotions do drive you to the edge. But time does heal all.ReplyDelete
Nice piece of pensive!ReplyDelete
Makes me think of the conversations that don't quite happen, the connections not quite made.ReplyDelete
I like how each stanza is stacked, like the rocks in the picture...ReplyDelete
@Rumya - yo are right time is indeed the biggest healer.ReplyDelete
@Nanka - Indeed. Thank you.
@Gautami Tripathy - welcome to GyanBan.
@Tumblewords - Merci.
@SandyCarlson - We speak so much ...but we never talk about the right things.
@Twitches -a glad you noticed. thanks and welcome to Gyan Ban.
What a lovely poem...you've created a poignant and stunning piece. Nicely written.ReplyDelete
The mood of the poem is perfect, with the rocks representing a stanza, masterful work gyan....ReplyDelete
Time heals ,yesReplyDelete
But one doesn't forget ever
the moments painful..
Beautiful take on the prompt.. loved it..
I invite you also to visit.. A Little More Than Ordinary , my page to bless my 100th post and also to laugh a bitReplyDelete
take my huge applause for making a wise post with simple words and wonderful craftingReplyDelete
am listing it in my "I recommend " page :)ReplyDelete
@Write Girl - well thank you for your kind words.ReplyDelete
@Shahid - am glad you appreciated it.
@sudeshna - :-))
@Ramesh - that was wonderful - and thank you.
@Mahesh - bows - thank you. and another one for your recommendation.
Amazingly beautiful GB..ReplyDelete
The new template.. I think the fonts must go a lil big.. Wat you say?? Just ma thinking.. :)
And yes the Title looks great.. :)
simplicity almost always makes a point. I really do enjoy dropping by here every so often.ReplyDelete
Deep thoughts Gyan, sensitive expression too, but i felt them a little disjointed. but overall, the words kind of mellow u down.ReplyDelete
@Bedlam - Took you suggestion and increased the fonts - thank you and much appreciated.ReplyDelete
@Sidra - couldn't agree with you more. I am so glad you do.
@ARMWASH - Thank you for your feedback. I will try to better next time.
beautiful! just loved it GB... keep them coming...ReplyDelete
Font looks perfect now.. Thank ya GB.. :)ReplyDelete
nice. the image adds to the mood of the poem.ReplyDelete
@Tavish - thnks a lotReplyDelete
@Bedlam -You are welcome and thank you for your suggestion again.
@g - it does, in fact it was the image that inspired the poem - one single impression.