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August 23, 2010

Pensive

memories build
feelings balance
touched by time...

pain wanes
tears dry
touched by time...

looking back
turmoils rage
a salt statue...

melancholy sound
emotions profound
edge of cliff...

flying down
floating soul
reach the sky...


wonder why
drifted life
my pensive sky...





Gyan Ban Thoughts - be kind, you never know who's heart you touch and who's blessings you might need.
Each verse is for each stone in the picture.

One Single Impression.

23 comments:

  1. Time heals everything...
    Beautiful pensive poem GB.

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  2. Pain, turmoils and emotions do drive you to the edge. But time does heal all.
    Lovely poem.

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  3. Makes me think of the conversations that don't quite happen, the connections not quite made.

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  4. I like how each stanza is stacked, like the rocks in the picture...

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  5. @Rumya - yo are right time is indeed the biggest healer.

    @Nanka - Indeed. Thank you.

    @Gautami Tripathy - welcome to GyanBan.

    @Tumblewords - Merci.

    @SandyCarlson - We speak so much ...but we never talk about the right things.

    @Twitches -a glad you noticed. thanks and welcome to Gyan Ban.

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  6. What a lovely poem...you've created a poignant and stunning piece. Nicely written.

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  7. The mood of the poem is perfect, with the rocks representing a stanza, masterful work gyan....

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  8. Time heals ,yes
    But one doesn't forget ever
    the moments painful..

    Beautiful take on the prompt.. loved it..

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  9. I invite you also to visit.. A Little More Than Ordinary , my page to bless my 100th post and also to laugh a bit

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  10. take my huge applause for making a wise post with simple words and wonderful crafting

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  11. am listing it in my "I recommend " page :)

    keep expressing

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  12. @Write Girl - well thank you for your kind words.

    @Shahid - am glad you appreciated it.

    @sudeshna - :-))

    @Ramesh - that was wonderful - and thank you.

    @Mahesh - bows - thank you. and another one for your recommendation.

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  13. Amazingly beautiful GB..

    The new template.. I think the fonts must go a lil big.. Wat you say?? Just ma thinking.. :)

    And yes the Title looks great.. :)

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  14. simplicity almost always makes a point. I really do enjoy dropping by here every so often.

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  15. Deep thoughts Gyan, sensitive expression too, but i felt them a little disjointed. but overall, the words kind of mellow u down.

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  16. @Bedlam - Took you suggestion and increased the fonts - thank you and much appreciated.

    @Sidra - couldn't agree with you more. I am so glad you do.

    @ARMWASH - Thank you for your feedback. I will try to better next time.

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  17. beautiful! just loved it GB... keep them coming...

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  18. Font looks perfect now.. Thank ya GB.. :)

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  19. nice. the image adds to the mood of the poem.

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  20. @Tavish - thnks a lot

    @Bedlam -You are welcome and thank you for your suggestion again.

    @g - it does, in fact it was the image that inspired the poem - one single impression.

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