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May 24, 2013

Mystics Dream


Lost in trance she dances
flying in the violet sky
the flamingos watch
the dreams in her eyes...

Lost in time she flows
flowing with the falls,
the snowy banks look on
listen to the droplets fall...

Lost in space she smiles
drifting with the stars
the universe grows
yet so much to love
and so little space to hold...



Gyanban Thoughts - Someday,there might be a tune to this poem,I wrote this listening to the Mystic's dream.

11 comments:

  1. I am falling short of adjectives to compliment your posts!

    Sigh.. I will still use the same adjective again -'Beautiful'

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  2. Makes me picture a little girl dancing among daisies on a grassy hillside. Lovely

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  3. Good to see you back here after a long time! Thanks for appreciating.

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  4. awesome awesome.. the last stanza. pretty awesome.

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    1. Welcome and thank yo for reading!

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  5. some of the lines were just too good.....keep it up

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    1. I will certainly try my best Ritesh. Welcome and thank you.

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